Thursday, April 16, 2020

Quick Write

3 comments:

  1. Hi Alexi
    I hope you and your family are going well during lockdown we are sure lucky with this weather.
    What an awesome story you made it feel like we were there with you, a pitty about the oars did the boat stay together? What was it like to sleep on a sandy Island did you have blankets?
    Keep up the good work
    Alana

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  2. Awesome story Alexi, I love it, wish I was on your sandy beach ��

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  3. Kia ora Alexi, You have written a detailed description using effective language. The blue background and wave pattern image are eye-catching add interest to your work. Well done.

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.