Hi Alexi I hope you and your family are going well during lockdown we are sure lucky with this weather. What an awesome story you made it feel like we were there with you, a pitty about the oars did the boat stay together? What was it like to sleep on a sandy Island did you have blankets? Keep up the good work Alana
Kia ora ALexi, Thanks for sharing your writing, I really enjoyed reading them. Quick Write sounds fun. Your story about the Watchful Athlete is adventure-filled and fun while your letter about ANZAC is thoughtful and sad. It shows that you have the ability to write in different styles which is a great skill to have. Ka pai to mahi/great work! I'm looking forward to seeing what you will write about next. Mrs Gully
Kia ora Alexi, You have written a detailed description using effective language. The blue background and wave pattern image are eye-catching add interest to your work. Well done.
Hi Alexi
ReplyDeleteI hope you and your family are going well during lockdown we are sure lucky with this weather.
What an awesome story you made it feel like we were there with you, a pitty about the oars did the boat stay together? What was it like to sleep on a sandy Island did you have blankets?
Keep up the good work
Alana
Awesome story Alexi, I love it, wish I was on your sandy beach ��
ReplyDeleteKia ora ALexi,
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your writing, I really enjoyed reading them. Quick Write sounds fun. Your story about the Watchful Athlete is adventure-filled and fun while your letter about ANZAC is thoughtful and sad. It shows that you have the ability to write in different styles which is a great skill to have. Ka pai to mahi/great work!
I'm looking forward to seeing what you will write about next.
Mrs Gully
Kia ora Alexi, You have written a detailed description using effective language. The blue background and wave pattern image are eye-catching add interest to your work. Well done.
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